Cotton On.

Hi this is challenge 4 of the student blogging challenge and I will write a story beginning and if you can please comment the rest of the story would be great to see how other people come up with endings.

Here I am in the Cotton On store, my name is Drew and I am here for my mum to get her some clothes because she is soo sick. Anyway I am BUSTING!! I have been wondering for ages trying to find a toilet and on top of that I forgot the list for mum. I am running through the store  now and all of a sudden……….    !!!CRASH!!!  I have fallen over a clothes stand and knocked over an old lady.

” oh I am soooo sorry how can I help you?”  By now the store manager is storming over to me.

” excuse me sir did you knock this old lady over and this stand?” Was that supposed to be a trick question obviously I did.

” yes but you see I am busting…” she didnt let me finish.

“no buts clean it up.” By now I know it is best not to argue so I do as she says.

“thats the trouble with kids these days they dont respect these elders” said the old lady. ………………………………………….

Please continue it for me.

 (follow this link to the student blogging challenge, challenge 4 > )   Challenge 4

Gabi xxx

2 thoughts on “Cotton On.

  1. Hi Gabbi,
    I like the start of your story – although it does remind me of another story that I have read…!
    Where did you get your idea for the story from?

    Miss C

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